Not only was I excited to meet him because he presented with a rare condition, but also because he and his chromosomal deletion had been the focus of my recent clinical case report, published in Genetics in Medicine.
What's important and unique is how you reacted to those incidents. Notice also how this paragraph is intentionally kept short. What Makes a Good Personal Statement?
Start brainstorming themes before you sit down to write. Review these items occasionally; let them tell you more about what you want your personal statement to say.
Set the draft aside for some time a number of days or weeksand then revisit it with fresh eyes. My experience as a teaching assistant nurtured my passion for medicine; I found that helping students required more than knowledge of organic chemistry.
Actions sometimes speaks louder than words so give examples of experiences rather than describing them. You may choose to show your analytical side by sharing an interesting perspective on a medical topic. The more time you have spent writing your statement, the less likely you are to spot any errors.
What does this tell you about your passions, your values?
Use jargon, abbreviations, slang, etc. Paragraph 4 As soon as I walked into the examination room, I noticed the mother avoiding eye contact with the genetic counselor while clutching her son to her chest.